WALT: Use detail in our writing to describe a setting.
Apocalypse
Cold, windswept and lifeless. The old city lay in a thick layer of dust, so lonely you could even feel its sadness. No air in that barren landscape. Nobody there. The tired dead trees creaked in their forever sleep. Fear had just spread itself across the land, the buildings, the school playground. No hope, just a grey, sandy canvas.
Apocalypse 2
A musty smell hung in the air. The whole place was a very light, sad green colour. A colour mourning of the bright life it had once lived. White fragments of a teacup lay dissipated on the floor. An old four poster bed sat moaning and groaning of age. Next to it were the remnants of a torn, tatty sleeping bag. That was the only evidence that two inhabitants had once lived there.
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